Score: 10

"Fucked up, and Fan tastic"

submission: Pico: The Shitty Power

date: April 30, 2008

thanks for thanking me in the credits. you're welcome.

Score: 9

"Fabulous"

submission: Pico Takes A Shit

date: April 30, 2008

Love your work, and loved this. Simple but effective. especially that ass angle... didn't expect that. Also loved how it was plainly what the title describes, and that's all that was needed.

Score: 9

"When Tom grows old he'll be a great santy clause."

submission: Purple Sawdust

date: April 30, 2008

That was really well done. Loved the menu, and little details like how brains popped out when he body slammed one of the people. I've honestly always wanted to come across a crowd of those helpless Paladin People just to have fun slaughtering them.

Score: 10

"I feel you man."

submission: Down At McDonalds

date: April 28, 2008

I have to confess I hate using public restrooms for this reason. I always imagine shit like that happening. I try making my presence in a stall seem non existent by not farting and always worry that the splash of poop grabs the attention of anyone else that might be around.

Score: 10

"instant classic"

submission: Ng Voicemail #973

date: April 26, 2008

I found it extra funny that tom's balls are as big as April's boobies. In the stick world, that's either good for tom, bad for amy... or vice versa.

Score: 10

"OMMGMGMGMGMGMG"

submission: Invader Zim Boredom Dub

date: April 1, 2008

HOW'D YA ANImATE THAT! it's so coooool! you deserve to work for invader zim on aniamting DA SHOW!

Score: 7

"hehe"

submission: [Misc] Teacher

date: March 29, 2008

that was simple, yet effective. i guess the advice i can give it is to make an icon for the submission.

Score: 5

"Hello."

submission: Halo: Orions Spartans II

date: March 21, 2008

I don't believe Halo and Anime go together well at all. The voice acting s honestly quite weak... I don't like how the models outside of the anime look obviously traced or just too dam close to the original stuff. the contrast of the visual style of everything except for the actual people inside the suits doesn't honestly work too well. And making the characters inside totally un-bad-ass japanese teenagers is kind of not working. the animation itself, like the motions and such is pretty weak and uninteresting. they almost seem humorous when they are running. the lack of animation in some of the tense moments, those typical slide show style displays of the characters standing next to each other while something intense is going on but they somehow don't seem to flinch about it kills that climactic moment at the end.

i know i'm sounding like a total hard ass, obviously, but it just seems like you do have he talent to pull it off but you just don't quite get there. it looks like you just need to put more time into the right places. this is just an honest review, i don't mean to say all those negative pointers just to be a prick. i'm just saying that its kind of interesting making some sort of series like this, kind of how star wars is making its own tv show. so you got some potential material, just needs a good lot more of work.

keep it up, and just keep thinking about improving and improving your work one right after the other.

;)

Score: 7

"Interesting"

submission: Outlaw pt.1

date: March 11, 2008

Very interesting concept for the story. But I honestly have to say the cinematography, pacing, choice of shots and sound editing could have been a lot better. I know I'm sounding real nit picky right now but the idea of a western mixed with a surreal after life is very interesting. and since westerns are a really well known for of cinema, would have been interesting if you played around with that with the visuals as well and the sound. like a western movie using like "psychadellic" music of something. my point is it would be cool if the next time you focus on making it feel more like a movie with editing, timing, shot placement, sound editing and such. instead of just going for another "anime" look.

but honestly, this is an extremely good start for a series. very well done.

-HVH

Score: 1

"read review."

submission: The Pen is Mightier...

date: March 9, 2008

sorry to say this but it was pretty bad. i do give you points for knowing how to make your mediocre animation triumph. just stick some kind of phrase mentioning "art" towards the end. Since people don't really know what art is. They can only consider those who label their work "art" to be art. you feel art, you don't accept a suggestion from it. and if these people need a sentence telling them to accept this piece as art, i am not legally allowed to express my feelings for them.

then again, this is just my opinion.