i really like this concept you're following.
but this episode really fell flat to me honestly. I liked the silence in the other ones, and i'm not saying this one should be silent. but i dunno it doesn't feel like a part of this non linear series. and the whole self reference at the end wasn't really effective. I'm being really picky now, but honest. As a stand alone movie it didnt hold up to well. that dialog towards the end on the couch didnt feel natural. it was awkward (a bad kind) how the kid punches him and he starts talking about his father. I thought he had no kids. how did he know Jerry was his father. the lead up to it was just really unfitting. etc etc
but again, i'm being picky. it still was well done, just could have been a lot better. especially coming from you. ;)